TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 07 [tl][timed][edit]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 07 [WR]

==I suggest replacing daihinmin with President terms == 
==I feel like I've been a little lenient with this one, sorry! ==

14
A collision? Well? {tlc - HS: A fender bender? A rear-end collision?}
A fender bender? Or a rear-end collision?
{I think the emphasis in this one is how the collisions are (frontal/ rear-end)}
{doesn't have too much impact on translation in all honesty}

18
Please go to bed.
Please go to bed for today.
{missed "kyou ha"}

22
{\i1}I wish that world would be destroyed!{\i0}
{\i1}I wish such a world would be completely destroyed!{\i0}
{I'd say sonna == such a , and te shimau indicates an action in its whole}

37
The typhoon hit the old Yamanashi area. {tlc - HS: It's inevitable that the school is closed with a typhoon like this.}
It goes without saying that the school is closed because of the typhoon.
{yamunashi = yamu wo enai = unavoidable} {I liberalized it a bit}

46
It really isn't working.
She's right, it really isn't working.
{I feel like there should be a comma in this spoken lie}


53 54 alternative
What to do...
What to do indeed...
{this might sound nicer in context due to repetition}

62
Since there are four of us, how about a game of Daihinmin?
{In this situation, you might want to get rid of the TL note and put in the term "Scum" or "President" instead, it's quite a useless TL note if people don't know that game in English either}

84
That time when the river embankment was torn down. {tlc - HS: The river overflowed because of the heavy, concentrated rain...}
That time when the river embankment breached due to torrential rain.
{tried to shorten it and add shuuchuugouu}

123
It's admirable that you can spontaneously bow your head before the mortuary tablets of people you don't know.
I'm impressed that you can spontaneously bow your head before the mortuary tablets of people you don't know.
{because I'm a literal fag and care about which person is nominative}

177
{\i1}Huh? My phone works?{\i0}
{I'm fine with liberal translation. A literal alternative is {\i1}Huh? Incoming calls work?{\i0}

298
Distant but close, distant but fun...
Distant but close, fun just because we're apart...
{he says tooi KARA tanoshii}

311
City Government Office
City Hall

323
Blue Sky City (Blue); Please Help to Save Electricity & Water (Pink on white - Only half is seen)
Open-air Market (Blue); Please Help to Save Electricity & Water (Pink on white - Only half is seen)
{aozorashi == free market}